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Writing ain't easy–not even for professionals, like me, who craftstories for a living. So it's no surprise that relative “amateurs”in the insurance industry called upon to compose press releases,claim letters, proposals, reports or simple e-mail correspondenceare often undermined by a lack of fundamental skills. My old friendand former colleague, Jack Appleman, offers invaluable help withhis new book on the basics of business writing.

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Jack and I started out together at “Modern Grocer,” a weeklynewspaper covering the supermarket industry, back in 1979–the job Ihad before coming aboard NU in 1981. Jack went on to become atop-notch public relations executive, including a long stint at amajor New Jersey insurance agency. For a number of years now, he'sconducted on-site training for national insurance carriers, as wellas taught at the university level.

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He certainly has a lot of good advice to offer. For a taste, youmay check out the article Jack wrote for NU back on Sept. 27, 2004,on this same general subject, headlined: “Bad Writing Can CostInsurers Time & Money.” (Click here to read that article.)

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The reason I'm recommending Jack's book is not just that he's afriend, but because so many in the insurance industry could benefitfrom what he has to teach. It's rare that I get a decently writtenpress release, and a number of the reports and letters that aresent to me from industry insiders are poorly drafted.

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The biggest problem for me personally is having people get tothe point quickly enough. (I have a “limit” of 20 words or less forthose pitching me a story idea, which Jack cites in his book).Other times, the ideas sent my way are communicated so badly that Idon't know what the person is getting at.

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That's why I'm quoted on Amazon.com and on the back cover of thebook as stating that Jack's 10-step program is “just what thedoctor ordered for anyone in business who gets tongue-tied whencommunicating ideas in writing.”

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I go on to say that his lively manual embodies everything heteaches, providing a clear and concise roadmap for those who fearlosing readers before getting their points across.

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(You may order Jack's book via Amazon.com by clicking here.)

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To give you a sample of the important lessons Jack teaches inboth his book and his live training sessions, the following is arecap of his 10-Step Program, in Jack's own words:

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–Step 1: Understand the Demand for Good Writing
If we don't write effectively, we get poor results. The pace andintensity of business demand that we communicate briefly andclearly–and doing so is a learned skill that richly repays theeffort we make.

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–Step 2: Know Where You're Taking Your Readers
It's a lot easier to find your way when you know where you'regoing. Define the message you want to get across to your readers,and then build a straight and solid bridge to lead them to yourpoint.

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–Step 3: Be Explicit, Clear and Concise
Don't present your readers with a murky swamp of vague terms,jargon, buzzwords, and stuffy phrases. Be precise and brief.

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–Step 4: Grab Your Readers' Attention
Start with what's most important, unleash active verb power, andpush readers' buttons.

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–Step 5: Write with Rhythm to Hold Your Readers
When there is a smooth flow to your words and sentences, with goodtransitions to unify ideas, your reader will move easily throughyour message.

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–Step 6: Organize to Help Your Readers Understand
Following the organizing method that's most suitable for eachdocument you create will help your readers grasp the point you'remaking. Arranging ideas in a logical order, using introductoryparagraphs and separating sections with subheads will make yourdocuments simple to follow and easy to understand.

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–Step 7: Choose a Tone That Produces Good Results
Fit your language and your attitude to your readers–even when thereaders are a diverse lot. This is a great way to empathize withthem.

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–Step 8: Put Your Best Grammar on the Page
Grammar is nothing more frightening than a set of simple rules.Grasp them, apply them, and bend some old ones.

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–Step 9: Edit, Rewrite, and Refine
When you've written your document, take your readers' position.Edit the document for message clarity, organization, and mechanics.Refine your writing until your gut tells you it's ready for yourreaders.

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–Step 10: Master the Documents You Use Most Often
If you become adept at writing the kinds of documents you produceevery day–e-mail messages, project proposals, customer letters,press releases or slide presentations–you'll have much less stressand get better results from your efforts.

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Certainly, this is all easier said than done. And this is justan outline of the key issues you need to address to become a moreeffective writer.

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Jack goes into great detail on each point, offering examples andconcrete exercises to improve your writing skills. I assure you,it'll be worth the effort.

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